Lepidus took a heaving breath and tryed to remember what had happened but miserable pain shook his body . He tryed to stand but the task was impossible and he gave up ,his master held his head on her lap and tears ran down her rosy cheeks .Many humans surrounded him as he struggled to tack a breath soon all the moments that ever happened in his life flashed before the dyeing horse's eyes and it started something like this
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Lepidus opened his eyes for the first time, his mother stood next to him and licked his slimy newly formed coat and looked at him with her tender eyes she bent down and touched his mussel with her"s and slowly the tiny foal tryed to stand but fell onto the soft bedding below . Shortly after the infit took his first step and was standing tall . After a short period of time several humans gathered around the large stall to see the slimy newborn after the humans came one stepped into the stall and dried the foal off to reveal a beautiful healthy colt the baby was snow white ,so white the they probably should have put a sign saying " do not look directly at foal or will suffer total blindness "
so far all i got Templado (was horselove but now templado )
Very good! I like the suspense. Why is he dying? WILl he die? I like it, Templado!
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well i am going to keep will he die a secret but the reson he is dieing is .............. HAHA i cant tell u i will have to wright the rest HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAH
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Nice Lauren... USE COMMAS AND PERIODS!
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ReplyDeleteAnd will you write the rest? The other horse stories have been left unfinished, and I am concerned. Are you going to leave me hanging, Templado? You know I can't stand that...Just look at The Ceiling Fan! Kevin kills me, one step at a time!
-A Very Obsessed and Mad President Fantasy