Lepidus's mother named Lacmira,was lead out of the stall and into one of the pastures and her little colt trailed behind happily . Lacmira slowly swished her tail as Lepidus slept underneath her . A unfamiliar horse came whinnied into the pasture ,as the horse was uncliped from the lead line it came galloping toward the mother and foal at full speed . As the sound of thundering hooves was herd by Lepidus he instantly woke and stood behind his mother . The stranger horse slowed as it came closer to the pair and winned " Lacmira its me !" . The horse was troting forward and looked very happy to see Lacmira and as soon as he came close Lacmira nusseled him happily . "and who is this hun ?" the strange horse looked at Lepidus . Lepidus looked at Lacmira "mama who is this ?" Lacmira nusseled Lepidus "that is you father Sparten but u can call him dad " . Spartin snichered and nusseled Lepidus .
well i need to go to bed now Templado
Spartan! Yay!
ReplyDeleteI like that name a lot. It's shaping up to be a great story, Miss Templado. Keep up the good work! You seem very dedicated to this story, and that's good. Keep going!
By the way, a small suggestion: When Spartan says "Lacmira, it's me!" to his wife, it makes him sound like he thinks she's a tad bit dumb. One would think that she knows him already.
Just a thought. Keep up the good work!
-President Fantasy
i must say i really think this story is on a roll o and the reason Spartin says "Lacmira its me " is because they are at a really big andalusian ranch so most of the horses look a little bit the same(i will expian latter in the story ) and he was sort of far away so that sums it up
ReplyDeletea very happy Templado