Nora was ready to run ,and prepared to lung forward .Lepidus pawed at the ground ,for he to was ready. A black mare in Nora's field trotted near the fence and whinnied "GO!".Both of the little ones leaped forward at the two lettered word.Nora sprinted ahead of Lepidus yet he was not far behind,the pair ran as hard as there little legs could manage .Yet Nora slid to a stop as a older colt troted over to her .The strange colt and Nora both looked at the fence then Nora backed up slowly .She carged forward, faceing the fence and lept over the top of it ladding perfectly now on Lepidus's paster . The strage colt did the same but in a less graceful and beautiful manner and insted almost fell at landing .Nora looked at Lepidus " how about another race ?"Dang it ! I go to go .Chow Chow all ;)
Templado
Templado
Indeed...Yes. VERY good. I like the character of Nora a great deal. She and Lepidus make a good pair.
ReplyDeleteThe part about the strange colt was slightly confusing...she stops as he comes over to her, but what does Lepidus do? Does that mean that he keeps going and gets ahead of her, or what?
Oh, yes, and I would like to ask again...may I please go through and edit it a bit? (I don't mean change any of the words...I just mean correct minor spelling changes and grammar problems, since I AM a grammar freak. Every great author needs an editor, you know.)
And I will burn you some more discs some time soon! Would you like A) some of Season 1, which mostly has Ethan and Phil doing random stuff, B) some of Season 2, which basically introduces the character of James and how he became an intern on the show, or C) the Road Trip Series from Season 2, which, while not quite as epic as Season 3, is pretty cool -- especially at the end. Wink, wink.
Oh, yes, one more thing: Did you and Tiger come over today and we just weren't here? Because just so you know, we're having our musical practice tomorrow, and we MAY just have the meeting afterward, depending on what the decision is.
Okay, I'm done. (Finally!)
-President Fantasy