Hello fellow club members! My story [not the Chapter 2 of A Text to Save the World! ] has had some changing to it. Please go find it, scroll down to where it says, NEW CHANGES HERE, and read until you reach the end of the story [ I have made minor changes to it too] or until it says, END OF CHANGES HERE. Thanks!
-Tiger
-Tiger
I see...very nice. I did notice that if Gandan is trying to get Alagin on his side, he's not doing a very good job. He also claims that what he wants is for Alagin to get angry? The plan still doesn't make sense to me.
ReplyDeleteBut I like the foreshadowing and the politics (that is, the stuff with the dwarves). Great going.
-President Fantasy
Thanks. I will have to fix it even more...[sigh]. If this is what it takes, I will do it!
ReplyDeleteHey... President Fantasy, I have more entries to give to you.
ReplyDelete-Tiger
You're welcome.
ReplyDelete-President Fantasy